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    Quote Originally Posted by tekina Log in to see links
    contests?
    did I miss something?
    you missed much

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    Quote Originally Posted by antonio Log in to see links
    you missed much
    I thought as much......

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    Quote Originally Posted by tekina Log in to see links
    I thought as much......
    the finals are just now

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    Quote Originally Posted by antonio Log in to see links
    the finals are just now
    well, good luck then.

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    the finalists are:


    RIVSTER

    ANTONIO(ME)

    SEAGODESS


  6. Question What do you think?

    Quote Originally Posted by the_dead_man Log in to see links
    Indeed, and this judjement isn't fair when competitors are the judges themselves, in-fact this doesn't even look like a competition, plus the judgement wasn't fair enough coz her poems deserved a much higher score...
    Quote Originally Posted by rivster Log in to see links
    What did you think of my suggestion of letting a neutral member judge our poems?
    Let's get this thread a bit organized,shall we?I am not the starter,so I require that everyone,including him,agrees.If not,then it's ok too.Then we have to continue in the fashion we were doing so.

    1)
    There will be no contest from now on.People will visit this thread to post poems they have composed,regardless of how short or how long it is.

    2)
    Everyone,except the poet of a particular poem,will vote for the poem and comment on it.If it's agreed that it's good,the poet will receive reps from the visiting members.

    3)
    If a poem is cited as not very good,the person citing it will have to give a valid reason.

    These are the points following which we can make this thread better.It's up to everyone to follow it or not.

    Thank You.


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    my 3 poems

    Take my hand and lead the way;
    tell me all you want to say.
    Whisper softly in my ear,
    all those things I want to hear.
    Kiss my lips and touch my skin;
    bring out passions deep within.
    Pull me close and hold me near;
    take away my pain and fear.
    In the darkness of the night,
    be my beacon, shine your light.
    In the brightness of the sun,
    show me that you are the one.
    Give me wings so I can fly;
    for I can soar when you're nearby.
    Enter my heart, break down the wall,
    it's time for me to watch it fall.
    I've been a prisoner, can't you see?
    Break my chains and set me free.
    Strip me of my armor tight;
    you'll find I won't put up a fight.
    Release my soul held deep within . . .
    I'm ready now, let love begin.






    I never thought that I would find
    a friend so great and a friend so kind
    I look up to you in every way
    'cause I learn something from you every day.

    Without you I don't know where I'd be
    but you're still here, friends with me
    you deserve so much more than I can give
    but without you I wouldn't live.

    You've given me more than money can buy
    and for you I'd give my all and I would die
    This feeling I feel gets stronger every day
    hoping not to screw it up, I constantly pray.

    I know we have our problems every now and then
    but once it's fixed our friendship is better times ten
    and I want you to know that I truly do care
    even in fights when I say things that aren't fair.

    You're an angel from God up above
    and I'm thankful for your understanding love
    because when you're around everything seems right
    and for you, until the end, I will fight.

    It doesn't matter what you do or say
    because you'll be my friend anyway
    I know the real you that's down deep inside
    and in you, I'll always confide.

    Thanks for being the friend you are
    you're my best friend, an angel by far
    everything in you is an inspiration to do great
    and you'll be loved by all cause that's your fate!

    So never stop being the real and wonderful you
    cause God shines through in all that you do
    and whenever it seems like I'm never there
    remember this: I love you and I'll always care!





    As you sit in silence,
    Wondering why
    I'll be your shoulder to cry on
    Until your tears run dry.

    When you've been hurt,
    And can't believe what they've done
    If you need someone to talk to
    I'll be the one.

    If a close friend hurts you,
    And you don't understand
    Remember I'm here,
    I'll lend a helping hand.

    Burdens are lighter when carried by two,
    And I just want you to know
    I'm here for you.

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    Quote Originally Posted by rivster Log in to see links
    Let's get this thread a bit organized,shall we?I am not the starter,so I require that everyone,including him,agrees.If not,then it's ok too.Then we have to continue in the fashion we were doing so.

    1)
    There will be no contest from now on.People will visit this thread to post poems they have composed,regardless of how short or how long it is.

    2)
    Everyone,except the poet of a particular poem,will vote for the poem and comment on it.If it's agreed that it's good,the poet will receive reps from the visiting members.

    3)
    If a poem is cited as not very good,the person citing it will have to give a valid reason.

    These are the points following which we can make this thread better.It's up to everyone to follow it or not.

    Thank You.

    if only you where my songood idea im with you

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    Quote Originally Posted by antonio Log in to see links
    my 3 poems

    Take my hand and lead the way;
    tell me all you want to say.
    Whisper softly in my ear,
    all those things I want to hear.
    Kiss my lips and touch my skin;
    bring out passions deep within.
    Pull me close and hold me near;
    take away my pain and fear.
    In the darkness of the night,
    be my beacon, shine your light.
    In the brightness of the sun,
    show me that you are the one.
    Give me wings so I can fly;
    for I can soar when you're nearby.
    Enter my heart, break down the wall,
    it's time for me to watch it fall.
    I've been a prisoner, can't you see?
    Break my chains and set me free.
    Strip me of my armor tight;
    you'll find I won't put up a fight.
    Release my soul held deep within . . .
    I'm ready now, let love begin.






    I never thought that I would find
    a friend so great and a friend so kind
    I look up to you in every way
    'cause I learn something from you every day.

    Without you I don't know where I'd be
    but you're still here, friends with me
    you deserve so much more than I can give
    but without you I wouldn't live.

    You've given me more than money can buy
    and for you I'd give my all and I would die
    This feeling I feel gets stronger every day
    hoping not to screw it up, I constantly pray.

    I know we have our problems every now and then
    but once it's fixed our friendship is better times ten
    and I want you to know that I truly do care
    even in fights when I say things that aren't fair.

    You're an angel from God up above
    and I'm thankful for your understanding love
    because when you're around everything seems right
    and for you, until the end, I will fight.

    It doesn't matter what you do or say
    because you'll be my friend anyway
    I know the real you that's down deep inside
    and in you, I'll always confide.

    Thanks for being the friend you are
    you're my best friend, an angel by far
    everything in you is an inspiration to do great
    and you'll be loved by all cause that's your fate!

    So never stop being the real and wonderful you
    cause God shines through in all that you do
    and whenever it seems like I'm never there
    remember this: I love you and I'll always care!





    As you sit in silence,
    Wondering why
    I'll be your shoulder to cry on
    Until your tears run dry.

    When you've been hurt,
    And can't believe what they've done
    If you need someone to talk to
    I'll be the one.

    If a close friend hurts you,
    And you don't understand
    Remember I'm here,
    I'll lend a helping hand.

    Burdens are lighter when carried by two,
    And I just want you to know
    I'm here for you.
    your poems are good but are on the same topic.You could bring in some variance.Anyway,repped you.
    So everyone agrees to the proposals?And thanks for agreeing,Antonio.

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    Quote Originally Posted by rivster Log in to see links
    your poems are good but are on the same topic.You could bring in some variance.Anyway,repped you.
    So everyone agrees to the proposals?And thanks for agreeing,Antonio.
    there the same cuz i found out that im going to have a baby

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