poems

[rivster]

there the same cuz i found out that im going to have a baby

wow,congrats,Antonio!

[Paul]

im going to have a baby

What so Mr antonio is pregnant

[rivster]

What so Mr antonio is pregnant

ha ha ha ha!FUNNY!

[antonio]

What so Mr antonio is pregnant

nah just my wife but it whoud be intresting

[didaroo]

The Four Steps
When I met you, I liked you.
When I liked you, I loved you.
When I loved you, I let you.
When I let you, I lost you.

[jmarin]

1)
There will be no contest from now on.People will visit this thread to post poems they have composed,regardless of how short or how long it is.

2)
Everyone,except the poet of a particular poem,will vote for the poem and comment on it.If it's agreed that it's good,the poet will receive reps from the visiting members.

3)
If a poem is cited as not very good,the person citing it will have to give a valid reason.

I agree with rivster
Personally I don't like to "Judge" poems....its individual self expression, though I think we should be able to discuss and share our opinions with Respect.

[didaroo]

so what about mine, good or bad?

[rivster]

so what about mine, good or bad?

Short and sweet.Good,but it's more of a para than a poem (to me,at least),though it has rhythm.Repped you.

[rivster]

I agree with rivster
Personally I don't like to "Judge" poems....its individual self expression, though I think we should be able to discuss and share our opinions with Respect.

Yeah,that would be better.Thanks for the suggestions.

[antonio]

The Four Steps
When I met you, I liked you.
When I liked you, I loved you.
When I loved you, I let you.
When I let you, I lost you.

that not a poem(atleast not for me)does somebody agree

also it was good