poems

My first poem :P

I love beer
I love girls
that makes me happier
than going to school :whistle:

:clap::clap::clap::clap:

Noxide Loves Boobies
Boobies Love Noxide
Without Boobies...
There'll Be No Noxide

:P

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Originally Posted by Lemmings

Without Boobies...
There'll Be No Noxide

:P

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There will also not be any females. Which means no procreation. Which means the end of the world. Which means boobies are vital to the survival of our species.

Uh-Oh,the pirates leave
Uh-Oh,one of their girls is Eve....:blink:

This is the first post in a forum I have ever made.I have a bit of interest in poems,so,here goes:


The golden rays of the sun knocked on the door,
it may seem weird,but they did,
I went down,as my spirits rose,
and there the sun's rays,me they hit.

Inspired I went out to commune with nature,
Mother nature being the creator of all,
but alas,I was touched and walked with my eyes closed,
to absorb nature's beauty, and banged into a wall.

There,dazed,I sat,nay,fell down,
To what I expected to be nature's soft ground.
Instead,I slumped down to something hard,
it was solid concrete,I painfully found.

Where had Mother nature vanished to?
The soft ground ,the grass,the clean breeze?
All I know is that the concrete jungle,the town,the city,
has had thee,for decades,under siege.




How was it?

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Originally Posted by rivster

This is the first post in a forum I have ever made.I have a bit of interest in poems,so,here goes:


The golden rays of the sun knocked on the door,
it may seem weird,but they did,
I went down,as my spirits rose,
and there the sun's rays,me they hit.

Inspired I went out to commune with nature,
Mother nature being the creator of all,
but alas,I was touched and walked with my eyes closed,
to absorb nature's beauty, and banged into a wall.

There,dazed,I sat,nay,fell down,
To what I expected to be nature's soft ground.
Instead,I slumped down to something hard,
it was solid concrete,I painfully found.

Where had Mother nature vanished to?
The soft ground ,the grass,the clean breeze?
All I know is that the concrete jungle,the town,the city,
has had thee,for decades,under siege.




How was it?

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Well done. Unlike other attempts, you really do understand art and express it vibrantly!

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Originally Posted by SeaGoddess

Endless herds of dreams go by

Broken, black, betrayed.

On a graveyard colored sky

Where the Time lays slayed...

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Thanks a lot!Your poem,too,was very good.I loved the phrase "graveyard colored sky".

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Originally Posted by SeaGoddess

Well done. Unlike other attempts, you really do understand art and express it vibrantly!

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:baby::baby:was mine good:nerd::nerd:

we seen some good poems but now we have to rate each others to advance in the quarter finals(the best poems have to write a new one):):)