poems

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Originally Posted by jmarin

I agree with rivster :)
Personally I don't like to "Judge" poems....its individual self expression, though I think we should be able to discuss and share our opinions with Respect.;)

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thats a good idea too:)

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Originally Posted by antonio

that not a poem(atleast not for me)does

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Poetry doesn't have to be a certain length :)

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Originally Posted by didaroo

The Four Steps
When I met you, I liked you.
When I liked you, I loved you.
When I loved you, I let you.
When I let you, I lost you.

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Thats not to bad mate :) rep

So who won this poems comp

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Originally Posted by Paul

Thats not to bad mate :) rep

So who won this poems comp

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for me rivster but we agread to start from the begining:)

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Originally Posted by antonio

for me rivster but we agread to start from the begining:)

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no,let there be no competition.Members should post their poems here.

I am becoming an insomniac.In a way it's good.Since I can write a poem whenever I am inspired,yesternight,2 am,for example.Anyway,it's not that good since it's not the genre I usually write in.so,here's my newest one.
Here goes:

Tribute to an Intriguing Emotion


The ones who have experienced it,
feel that there's nothing greater;
They tell you that when it's lost,
you are left with just a humongous crater.

They say that the feeling,
is so wonderfully weird;
That you may even forget who you are,
even so,the consequences are never feared.

They say,it makes the meanest,tame,
and boggles the mind too;
But it can't be kept under chains,
as it bounces back without a clue.

With it by your side,
you have courage and passion;
Dearth of it leads to a leaden life,
an existence,too ashen.

The ones who have truly experienced it,
are the luckiest beings on Earth;
Those who haven't,yet,
there's hope,as full as a hearth.

It's nature's gift to her children,a miracle and no less,
treasure it,cherish it and to it,always be kind;
For once it is lost in the array of other emotions,
it's almost impossible to find.

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Originally Posted by rivster

no,let there be no competition.Members should post their poems here.

I am becoming an insomniac.In a way it's good.Since I can write a poem whenever I am inspired,yesternight,2 am,for example.Anyway,it's not that good since it's not the genre I usually write in.so,here's my newest one.
Here goes:

Tribute to an Intriguing Emotion


The ones who have experienced it,
feel that there's nothing greater;
They tell you that when it's lost,
you are left with just a humongous crater.

They say that the feeling,
is so wonderfully weird;
That you may even forget who you are,
even so,the consequences are never feared.

They say,it makes the meanest,tame,
and boggles the mind too;
But it can't be kept under chains,
as it bounces back without a clue.

With it by your side,
you have courage and passion;
Dearth of it leads to a leaden life,
an existence,too ashen.

The ones who have truly experienced it,
are the luckiest beings on Earth;
Those who haven't,yet,
there's hope,as full as a hearth.

It's nature's gift to her children,a miracle and no less,
treasure it,cherish it and to it,always be kind;
For once it is lost in the array of other emotions,
it's almost impossible to find.

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cool poem the last phrase is the best:)

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Originally Posted by antonio

cool poem the last phrase is the best:)

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Thanks!Took me a whole minute to come up with that phrase.Nothing would rhyme as well.

I think the inriguing emotion is either love or sex, am I close?

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Originally Posted by didaroo

I think the inriguing emotion is either love or sex, am I close?

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the first one,love.sex is not an emotion,at least,I don't think it is.

my bad, not a emotion, but it a feeling, yes?