poems

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Originally Posted by antonio

there the same cuz i found out that im going to have a baby:wow::wow:

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wow,congrats,Antonio!

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Originally Posted by antonio

im going to have a baby:wow::wow:

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What so Mr antonio is pregnant :o


:laugh::laugh:

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Originally Posted by Paul

What so Mr antonio is pregnant :o


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ha ha ha ha!FUNNY!

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Originally Posted by Paul

What so Mr antonio is pregnant :o


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nah just my wife but it whoud be intresting:):laugh::laugh:

The Four Steps
When I met you, I liked you.
When I liked you, I loved you.
When I loved you, I let you.
When I let you, I lost you.

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Originally Posted by rivster

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There will be no contest from now on.People will visit this thread to post poems they have composed,regardless of how short or how long it is.

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Everyone,except the poet of a particular poem,will vote for the poem and comment on it.If it's agreed that it's good,the poet will receive reps from the visiting members.

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If a poem is cited as not very good,the person citing it will have to give a valid reason.

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I agree with rivster :)
Personally I don't like to "Judge" poems....its individual self expression, though I think we should be able to discuss and share our opinions with Respect.;)

so what about mine, good or bad?

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Originally Posted by didaroo

so what about mine, good or bad?

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Short and sweet.Good,but it's more of a para than a poem (to me,at least),though it has rhythm.Repped you.

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Originally Posted by jmarin

I agree with rivster :)
Personally I don't like to "Judge" poems....its individual self expression, though I think we should be able to discuss and share our opinions with Respect.;)

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Yeah,that would be better.Thanks for the suggestions. :thumbsup:

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Originally Posted by didaroo

The Four Steps
When I met you, I liked you.
When I liked you, I loved you.
When I loved you, I let you.
When I let you, I lost you.

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that not a poem(atleast not for me)does somebody agree

also it was good:)